BlameThePixel!

Here for you I have part one of A Wormy Story (part two will follow shortly on this thread provided people enjoy part one). Please tell me honestly what you think, because your opinions matter greatly to me

PART ONE:

'Interesting.'
'Yes, very interesting.'
'Bit of a shame really.'
'Yeah, I liked Fluffy.'
'Still, could have happened to anyone.'
'Who was to know the grenade would land there?'
'Exactly.'
Nomad and his friend Scruff wriggled away from the completely destroyed forest, where they had successfully defeated the Dun'Huntin in battle, not to mention their own team mate, Fluffy.
Meanwhile, the members of Dun'Huntin were being brought back to life by the amazing Whojamiflick, which was operated by a scientist worm, Scientist. The first to be revived was the team leader, Rizzo. He wriggled out of the machine.
'Honestly!' he exclaimed, 'That's the third time in a row that Morning 7 beats us! I tell you, if it goes on at this rate, they'll win the whole tournament!'
'Not to mention the world,' muttered Scientist.
'Yes, there is that too. But it's not like others haven't done that before. But this is the grand tournament! A bigger one has never been seen in the history of the worms universe! Worms from all over have come to this planet to fight. If they win, our team will never live it down.'
'Rumor has it that the tournament's being moved to plant Gozfarlcer,' said Scientist, as the second worm, Magician, wriggled out of the machine. 'The constructions teams just can't rebuild this planet fast enough. Soon there will be no room to fight at all, so it will be moved to Gozfarlcer temporarily until they've repaired this planet sufficiently.'
'Excellent! That's my whole teams home planet. We know the terrain around there, which should give us a big edge against that rotten Morning 7 team.'
'Hey,' said Magician cheerfully. 'I've got some great news. We have been rated one of the top ten teams in the tournament.'
'Really?' asked Rizzo, suprised. 'There's still quite a bit to go. What are the other nine teams?'
'There's Morning 7, one called Fox Gallopers, another called Warriors, one called The Dark Side, and others I can't remember.'
The third member, Cheese, wriggled out of the machine just in time to hear the last comment. 'Garhh! Trust Morning 7 to be in the top ten!'
'Patience friends,' said Scientist. 'Everything comes to he who waits. I feel the time is soon that you will have an opportunity to crush Morning 7. You will know when the time is right.'

Later that day, the Morning 7 team gathered in a resturaunt to celebrate their victory.
'Man,' said Spoony, 'That Dun'Huntin team sure is a pushover.'
'Yeah,' said Scruff,'Soon they'll be out of the tournament.'
'Good riddance to bad rubbish,' said Squeak.
'Sorry about before Fluffy,' said Nomad. 'I had forgotten they had supplied strong winds which affected grenades.'
'That's ok,' said Fluffy. 'It happens to everyone once in a while. And besides, it wont matter if, sorry I mean when, we win this tournament.'
'Huh huh huh,' chuckled Grunge.
'To victory,' said Issac and Chocolate Chip together, raising their drinks.
'To victory!' chanted all of them, clinking drinks together.

Cool story so far. I hope to read more.

Thank you. Part two is nearly finished, just a few odd ends which need polishing. Stay tuned

That was a cool wormy story

perhaps I shouldn't be replying to such a post, but since you've brought it up, I might as well continue it.

PART TWO:

It was morning the next day. Worms everywhere were getting up, having breakfast, (amongst other things) and heading over to the Universal Worms Tournament Arena, or UWTA for short. The UWTA was the headquarters of the whole tournament. From there, worms would catch up with their team mates, and discuss plans for the coming battles. It would be a few hours until the battles actually began though, so they would have to find ways to keep themselves busy. This wasn’t hard, because the arena was like a city. There were shops, restaurants, gaming centres, training gyms, luxury suites, and so on.
The worms were told via large monitors throughout the arena when they should make their way to the Main Arena. Once everyone was there, the announcer worm, Announcer, would announce the details of each battle in turn.
Noodle, the leader of the Fox Gallopers team, looked around impatiently. ‘Stupid Crispy,’ he muttered. ‘He should be here by know, and I think we’re next!’
It was then that he saw the worm in question rushing over towards him. ‘Finally!’ Noodle exclaimed. ‘Where have you been?’
‘Sorry boss,’ said Crispy. ‘It was an emergency.’
‘Well shut up!’ said another team mate of theirs, Prince, ‘Announcer is about to speak again.’
‘The next two teams are…’ cried out the Announcer as he drew names from a hat. ‘Fox Gallopers, and…’
‘I knew we were next,’ said Merlin.
‘…Satan’s Minions.’
Noodle chanced a glance at the team. They were wearing all sorts of bracelets and rings and chains and suchlike. And they were all grinning at him wickedly. He turned away.
’The details of this match are as follows: all super sheep granted will be with aqua abilities. All worms are to be equipped with crate-spy devices. The whole terrain will be covered in slippery substances. The weapons pack granted is “normal�. If you’re not sure what that is, read the chart over on the far wall. You will have fifteen minutes before “sudden death� begins, at which point water will be poured through pumps, causing the terrain to slowly flood. There will be mines and oil drums on the terrain, mines will be at random fuse and dud setting will be enabled. Worms will have 100 life and you must follow the order of your team unless you choose to use a Switch Worm power. Now enter the teleport machine, which will transport you to the terrain you will be battling on. It is an open terrain, and in the Sports theme.’
‘I tell you,’ said Speedsta to Floss as they wriggled over, ‘That guy forgot some stuff. Like, do we leave donor cards behind?’
‘You idiot!’ replied Floss. ‘A donor card only appears when the whole team is defeated. And since there are only two teams, it doesn’t make a difference, does it?’
Speedsta put his tongue out in reply.
And so the Fox Gallopers and Satan's Minions team made their way, one by one, into the teleporter, and onto the terrain. Noodle realised that this would be a battle not easily won.

Very cool. Are you planning to make these worms play turn based?

I don't read alot of things in the Typewriter forum but this is getting interesting.

Well done Evil and I hope to see more.

Probably because there is hardly ever anything here. Good job EvilWeevil.

Thanks guys. Sorry for the wait, here's...

PART THREE:

Noodle was up first. To his annoyance, he discovered he was right at the waters edge.
“Cardboard Box,� he said into his transmitter. “I’m switching to you once I’ve moved away from the edge.�
“Okey dokey sir.�
Noodle did indeed move away from the edge until he was hugging the wall, not literally of course, and he pressed a button on his state-of-the-art watch.
Cardboard Box heard a beep, and he immediately got to work. He had been planning carefully, and decided it was best to drop a stick of dynamite on the group of FIVE worms who had ended up together in a small dip covered by a goal post. He could tell they were enemies by the red hologram of each of their names hovering above their heads.
“Just our luck,� muttered Being Of Flame. “The teleport machine is rigged, I’m telling you! What are the chances of five worms from the same team appearing in the same place?�
Cardboard box was getting very close now, dynamite at the ready. He was chuckling to himself as he made his way downhill.
“Never fear,� said Supreme Demon. “Oh my god watch out for that mine!� he shouted suddenly. Cardboard Box panicked and accidentally set the fuse for his dynamite off, just too out of reach of the group to do any harm.
Noodle, who was watching this all from his watch, which was projecting the scene as a hologram, groaned. He could only look on in horror as Cardboard Box tried desperately to back-flip up the hill he had come down, but to no avail. There was a loud explosion, and he was blown far up into the sky, before plummeting down into the water.
Cheers arose from Satan’s Minions, whilst the Fox Gallopers team yelled in anger. Except for Yajor, who was admiring and somewhat suspicious of how Cardboard Box had been thrown so high into the air.
Next up was the leader of Satan’s Minions, Supreme Demon. He got away from the group and back-flipped up the hill with ease, until he was at the top of the whole terrain. He got out his bazooka and aimed carefully upwards. He checked the wind on his watch, double checked to make sure, then fired at full power.
The missile made it’s way a little way past the terrain, then turned round and came down, right on the alcove were Noodle was standing. He let out a small cry before being blasted into the water.
More cheers, more yells.
Now it was Floss turn. Determined to make a comeback, he got out a ninja rope and fired it at a rugby helmet. He pulled himself right up to it and extended and decreased the rope for a bit, before he made a dramatic twirl and let go, propelling himself to the other side of the terrain, where he made sure to launch it again before he let go. He was attached to the piece of terrain above the goal post, where four of Satan’s Minions still remained. He got out his parachute, extended the rope till he was just behind Supreme Demon, and with extreme skill, managed to knock him down into the dip.
Fortunately the wind was in his favour, being non-existent. He got out a sheep, and let it bounce down into the dip. He quickly swerved his parachute so he landed on a diagonal slope leading down to the dip, and made his way up till his retreat time ended. But just before it did, he pressed a button and…
Boom! The worms in the dip were thrown about, some landing on the hill, others on the slope, whilst Being Of Flame remained in the dip, which was now a gigantic hole. Unfortunately, Floss was in the explosion radius, and was bounced up a bit, which made him slide down the hill, and into the hole.
None of the worms died, but they were all looking considerably hurt. Understandable, since they were all on around 30 to 40 life, except Floss, who was on 90.
“Nice one Floss,� said Speedsta through his transmitter.
“Thanks,� replied Floss.
Now it was Eternal Keeper’s turn. He was not one of the ones who had been in the dip. He was on a bridge, with Speedsta next to him, and a bit further on was an oil barrel, along with a mine. This was an opportunity just too good to miss! He was about to lob a grenade, when one of his team mates transmitted to him, “You idiot, use a fire punch.�
He growled, but he knew his team mate was right. He attached a bandana and punched Speedsta into the mine and barrel. He was happy to hear the mine start ticking, and got a bit closer for a better look. This was a bad move, as the mine and barrel exploded, and the blast sent him and Speedsta through the hole in the bridge, where they proceed to land on another mine, along with Merlin. Another explosion, and needless to say, both Speedsta and Eternal Keeper were dead. The damage from them as they exploded meant that Merlin ended up having a grand total of 7 life.
Elsewhere, Crispy, who was at the edge of the terrain, but quite high up, looked at the statistics on his watch. Speedsta, Noodle, and Cardboard Box were dead. Merlin was nearly dead, and Floss had been wounded a bit. On the plus side, Eternal Keeper was dead, and Supreme Demon, Being Of Flame, Pit Lord, Horned Devil, and Verlak The Horrible (there was no limit to the number of characters one could have in his name. Some didn‘t like this, as particularly nasty worms gave themselves really long names so that the hologram above their head was stretched to ridiculous proportions. Understandably, many found this extremely annoying) were badly wounded.
Crispy wasn't sure yet how the battle would turn out.

I'm feeling lazy, so I'll leave in suspense as to how the battle will end up.