BlameThePixel!

I'm making this a serial comic with weird jokes.

Tell me what you think.

the quality of the worm isnt ver good and maybe you can make some riples in the sea? around the rock

pretty basic., the worm looks no diffirent in the 1st and last frame?

And also, I've already done a ninja worm comic. I've got them in a zip on my FTP:
http://members.lycos.co.uk/psymonstark/
I made these ages ago.

lol, I was wondering the same, I didnt know if the 2nd one was the "sadness"

The worm looks like it was cut out from paper. The joke would've been good had his face really been sad in the third frame. Overall score: D-

Actually, the worm is meant to have a white outline. It kinda looked crap in the second frame. And the only thing I'll probably put decent detail in are the worms themselves.

In the second frame, he was just scratching his head rather then being sad. I couldn't make a sad sprite, let alone find one, so I just gave him a different expression.

And when he says "That's better!" He means he had an itchy head (I guess )

im gonna scuff food and stare at the wall then.

But youll know what i mean by that, other can click below.

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honestly. some people

Ok then, I have one link for you then.

Click here

So that link Is too a comic that is good? I fail to see your point.

Your comic sucked ass, to be honest.

Would you watch a film based in the past with people wearing nomral cloths becasue they couldn tbe bothered renting proper ones. OR the set was obviously painted on cardboarD?

sure some comics suck graphically but are still funny. ( maybe that was your point? )

THey are still funny becasue they had a joke in them. Unfortuantly yours had niether.

Sorry, but I gotta go with Wish on this one. You should NOT have to talk to the creator for such a long time just to see what the crap the comic was even about. Either work on your comedy, or your graphical skillz. Or preferably, both

Zornor, White Ninja is not an example of rubbish graphics but still being funny. The graphics is the best in it's black and white hand drawn niche.

altho unfortunately white nijna isnt all that funny. He calls it satire, but thats being generous.

C'mon, have some nive criticism rather than almost flaming. Don't go "OMGOMG FUCK YOU I HOPE YOU DIE." It's just what you're doing.

You ask for criticism but reject it once you hear it's not what you want it to be? Bah, why ask in the first place.